
Her swiftly failing vintage memory
compels her to ask
Who are you?
Unsolicited emotions carefully buried inside
elicit exclamations of sadness and fright
I am the one to whom you sang
whom you called your little lamb
for whom, you loudly and proudly cheered
for whom, you willingly sacrificed many years
to whom you said
I am you and
you are me
and there can never be an ‘in between’
I am the one you promised never to forget
I am your daughter, ma
not reminding you that enough, my biggest regret.
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Dementia and Alzheimer’s affect so many people and relations across the world. Its the worst thing which can happen to a child and a parent. This is not my story (god’s grace) but I have seen someone close, who has gone through this. This poem is a tribute to their relationship.
Inspired by Go Dog Go Cafe Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge : swiftly failing memory https://wordpress.com/read/blogs/130149259/posts/12331
Heart wrenching.
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I did cry some tears writing this. 😞 thank you for reading and commenting. 🙏
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So welcome!
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As a son with a parent(my mother) who suffered Alzheimer’s, I’m deeply touched by your eloquent poem…. xx
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Hugs to you Ivor. It’s the hardest thing, I can’t even comprehend the pain.
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Thanks for raising this issue. Very heartbreaking ❤
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Thanks Rosaliene. 💕🙏
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This really touched my heart, Pallavi. ❤️
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Thanks 🙏
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Heart breaking emotions in those words Pallavi. It’s hard to imagine their pain and helplessness.
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Truly Radhika. Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙏
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Very nice but there have so many hidden emotions.
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Thank you so much 🙏
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Hard to even imagine how people go through all that pain, your poem really helps a lot to understand and feel the pain. Good work!
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It’s a very sad thing, indeed. Thank you for reading. 💕
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This is so heart wrenching and emotional…so beautifully written 👌
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Thank you, Sarika 💕
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That’s so sad and beautiful. I have to do poetry for next week’s homework. I can only hope to write something so well written.
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Thank you Kathy. What a heartfelt compliment but I have read your pieces and have no doubt you will come up with something great. Good luck! 💕
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I love the idea, compelled by your memory. ..
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Thanks, Joey!
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Wow! So very powerful, profound and moving. It is both heart-wrenching and deeply beautiful at the same time.
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Thank you so much!
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This is so emotional!
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Thanks Namrata!
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